Today i and the Creative and Media Class had to finish some work experience paperwork for "SHOW", and had to contact our local charity about arranging a meeting. We all had to write an email to the charity we chose to work with but we all had difficulties using grammer and making it sound professional.
It took us quite a while to send the email because our tutor kept on nagging us on whats right and whats wrong .
Hello, my name is In Hoang and I am a student at Southwark College studying a Creative and Media Course. The unit that we are focusing on this term is called Interaction, which involves working with local charities and organisations.
I have chosen to work with Youth Music Organisation, because I am interested in helping to support young people age 0-18 years old, to develop new skills and talent through music and help them lead to a success in the future.
If possible, can we arrange a meeting to discuss this further.
you can contact me on : email@example.com
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
This is my first email i sent to youth music, i had difficulties on sentence structure but i managed to get a reply from them.
Thank you for your email.
Can you clarify what kind of work are you looking to do in collaboration with Youth Music?
Business Development Assistant
1 America Street
London, SE1 0NE
t: 020 7902 1060
f: 020 7902 1061
Registered charity no. 1075032
P Please consider the environment before printing this email
They replied to my message but im having problems on what to reply back to them.